http://www.morganpdx.com/2009/01/end-wordiness/ Trees, dogs, music, houses, friends and rain. Tue, 13 Dec 2011 20:51:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://www.morganpdx.com/2009/01/end-wordiness/comment-page-1/#comment-146 Ceci Wed, 28 Jan 2009 18:47:43 +0000 http://www.morganpdx.com/?p=494#comment-146 I dunno about wordiness... I mean... I've learned to edit my posts from what they used to be... and I've stopped writing about ALLL the little things that happened... well, mostly. Still, sometimes, it's just hard to trim it down. HOWEVER, I think once you're aware of that, you make more of an effort to look at a post and say "what could I have done without/ what can I do without..." Doesn't always happen but you can TRY... and fuck what Yoda says about trying! I dunno about wordiness… I mean… I’ve learned to edit my posts from what they used to be… and I’ve stopped writing about ALLL the little things that happened… well, mostly.
Still, sometimes, it’s just hard to trim it down. HOWEVER, I think once you’re aware of that, you make more of an effort to look at a post and say “what could I have done without/ what can I do without…”
Doesn’t always happen but you can TRY… and fuck what Yoda says about trying!

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